jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by manchestermike on Jan 31, 2008 12:34:18 GMT 1, 
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top
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by top on Jan 31, 2008 12:36:27 GMT 1, Thats better!
Thats better!
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Montubu7
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Montubu7 on Jan 31, 2008 12:38:26 GMT 1, I like the red one...
I like the red one...
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Montubu7
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Montubu7 on Jan 31, 2008 12:39:18 GMT 1, Have you sprayed these or are they mock ups??
Have you sprayed these or are they mock ups??
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jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by jed100375 on Jan 31, 2008 12:40:16 GMT 1, Gun Baby and Lolly pop are sprayed. Lolly pop cam out really well. gonna spray heart dance at the weekend.
Gun Baby and Lolly pop are sprayed. Lolly pop cam out really well. gonna spray heart dance at the weekend.
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by fartofthestate on Jan 31, 2008 12:43:17 GMT 1, I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up.
I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up.
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jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by jed100375 on Jan 31, 2008 12:47:19 GMT 1, Nothing i am doing is for sale. I just wanted advice on how to improve and get some feedback.
Nothing i am doing is for sale. I just wanted advice on how to improve and get some feedback.
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Joe J
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Joe J on Jan 31, 2008 12:51:19 GMT 1, I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up.
I am big believer in the expression.
'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all'
Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt.
I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up. I am big believer in the expression. 'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all' Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt. |
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beau
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by beau on Jan 31, 2008 12:56:37 GMT 1, fartofthestate - you cynical fuck you must be a really sad and angry little person.
good on Jed for doing something he fancied and having the nerve to share it with people who are meant to be interested in art and the whole scene - not just monitoring the boards to check the latest release or market values
part of me actually agrees with you though fart, -it is a bit lame!
fartofthestate - you cynical fuck you must be a really sad and angry little person.
good on Jed for doing something he fancied and having the nerve to share it with people who are meant to be interested in art and the whole scene - not just monitoring the boards to check the latest release or market values
part of me actually agrees with you though fart, -it is a bit lame!
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by fartofthestate on Jan 31, 2008 12:59:36 GMT 1, I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up. I am big believer in the expression. 'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all' Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt.
I'm a big believer in, if you don't say what you think because it might offend, then they will get away with all kinds of shit and your to blame for keeping your mouth shut!
I'm bored of people putting rough photoshop mock ups on here in the hope someone will go crazy for them and want it as a print. The band wagons almost gone boys, you better start running fast to catch up. I am big believer in the expression. 'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all' Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt. I'm a big believer in, if you don't say what you think because it might offend, then they will get away with all kinds of shit and your to blame for keeping your mouth shut! |
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jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by jed100375 on Jan 31, 2008 13:00:04 GMT 1, Cheers beau. I got your back!
Cheers beau. I got your back!
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Joe J
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Joe J on Jan 31, 2008 13:04:47 GMT 1, I am big believer in the expression. 'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all' Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt. I'm a big believer in, if you don't say what you think because it might offend, then they will get away with all kinds of s**t and your to blame for keeping your mouth shut!
Fair enough... focusing on this belief, do you think your previous comment was 'constructive criticism'?
I am big believer in the expression. 'if you have nothing good to say.. best don't say it at all' Anyway... Good luck with the weekends attempt. I'm a big believer in, if you don't say what you think because it might offend, then they will get away with all kinds of s**t and your to blame for keeping your mouth shut! Fair enough... focusing on this belief, do you think your previous comment was 'constructive criticism'? |
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by hypovalaemic on Jan 31, 2008 13:04:52 GMT 1, lollypops my fav, well done for the effort!
lollypops my fav, well done for the effort!
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mainartery
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by mainartery on Jan 31, 2008 13:06:38 GMT 1, Dont like them at all
Dont like them at all
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seidbereit
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by seidbereit on Jan 31, 2008 13:15:22 GMT 1, From the top:
1) Not bad at all.. could do with being loads wider with more background, bit long and narrow as it is, pretty cool though in a nearly magic-eye kind of way - the two fingers look a bit long.
2) Sniggered for a second, not my cup of tea though
3) Had her
4) Don't really know about that one...
5) Baby + guns hmmm.... like the mobile idea, but erm.. babies and guns.
Keep it up. Work on the top one a bit. Could be quite a good one.
From the top:
1) Not bad at all.. could do with being loads wider with more background, bit long and narrow as it is, pretty cool though in a nearly magic-eye kind of way - the two fingers look a bit long.
2) Sniggered for a second, not my cup of tea though
3) Had her
4) Don't really know about that one...
5) Baby + guns hmmm.... like the mobile idea, but erm.. babies and guns.
Keep it up. Work on the top one a bit. Could be quite a good one.
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top
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by top on Jan 31, 2008 13:17:28 GMT 1, ..I had her before you seidbereit..back of the chippy last week  
..I had her before you seidbereit..back of the chippy last week |
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Run Pig Run
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Run Pig Run on Jan 31, 2008 13:22:45 GMT 1, Gun Baby and Lolly pop are sprayed. Lolly pop cam out really well. gonna spray heart dance at the weekend.
no offence but they don't look sprayed.......
Gun Baby and Lolly pop are sprayed. Lolly pop cam out really well. gonna spray heart dance at the weekend. no offence but they don't look sprayed....... |
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brenclan
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by brenclan on Jan 31, 2008 14:10:12 GMT 1, I'm not looking to massage my ego or anything like that. In fact what i am after is advice and guidance on how to improve.
As Jed has already mentioned, he is looking for further tips on how to improve and given the very purpose of this forum, he has come to one of the few places that can offer advise.
I'm sure many people on here have picked up on how to go about creating the images for stencils on here by using the grayscale and threshold tools in photoshop. I'm sure now what many people are curious about is more tips on refining their first attempts.
Yet some people prefer to use the opportunity to take a swipe at people. We need more posts like this in order to generate more informative mails like the recent gel-transfer process tutorial.
I'm not looking to massage my ego or anything like that. In fact what i am after is advice and guidance on how to improve. As Jed has already mentioned, he is looking for further tips on how to improve and given the very purpose of this forum, he has come to one of the few places that can offer advise. I'm sure many people on here have picked up on how to go about creating the images for stencils on here by using the grayscale and threshold tools in photoshop. I'm sure now what many people are curious about is more tips on refining their first attempts. Yet some people prefer to use the opportunity to take a swipe at people. We need more posts like this in order to generate more informative mails like the recent gel-transfer process tutorial. |
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jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by jed100375 on Jan 31, 2008 14:16:03 GMT 1, Hmmm... i think the first lesson i have learned is that an actual photo of the canvas is better to post so in future will do that.
Hmmm... i think the first lesson i have learned is that an actual photo of the canvas is better to post so in future will do that.
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beau
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by beau on Jan 31, 2008 14:31:20 GMT 1, jed 80% of people dont make it off their computer and onto canvas, 99% dont make it onto the streets, what are you planning on doing with these?
jed 80% of people dont make it off their computer and onto canvas, 99% dont make it onto the streets, what are you planning on doing with these?
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jed100375
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by jed100375 on Jan 31, 2008 14:35:33 GMT 1, Beau
Well i have already sprayed two up and i think they look really good. To be honest one of the reasons of posting here was to get guidance on that very subject. What do you think i should do?
Beau
Well i have already sprayed two up and i think they look really good. To be honest one of the reasons of posting here was to get guidance on that very subject. What do you think i should do?
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gtf
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by gtf on Jan 31, 2008 15:00:51 GMT 1, The only one that I like is the last one, Gun Baby. I would like to see the spray painted version since I'm not sure if it will work in black, grey and white. It might be better to have some colour although as you are no doubt aware this is more difficult.
Keep trying!
The only one that I like is the last one, Gun Baby. I would like to see the spray painted version since I'm not sure if it will work in black, grey and white. It might be better to have some colour although as you are no doubt aware this is more difficult.
Keep trying!
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by orangematt on Jan 31, 2008 15:32:04 GMT 1, Post a pic of the sprayed up version
Post a pic of the sprayed up version |
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BK83
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by BK83 on Jan 31, 2008 19:39:39 GMT 1, Fair enough for showing us the work in progress... .they all need a lot of work - I mean., how are we meant to constructively criticize these pieces when they're only halfway done.......
Fair enough for showing us the work in progress... .they all need a lot of work - I mean., how are we meant to constructively criticize these pieces when they're only halfway done.......
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Lord Lucas Roham on Jan 31, 2008 19:57:01 GMT 1, Your one sick puppy
Your one sick puppy
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by Coach on Jan 31, 2008 20:14:47 GMT 1, girls in stripey stockings - always does it for me!
my kids might ask what it's about tho'!
not a bad first effort tho', and thanks for sharing
girls in stripey stockings - always does it for me! my kids might ask what it's about tho'! not a bad first effort tho', and thanks for sharing |
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GVD
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by GVD on Jan 31, 2008 20:38:15 GMT 1, Youre using the cutout filter right? or the posterize function?
To get clearer images you should enlarge the images quite a bit and then adjust the brightness and contrast a bit. then use the cutout/posterize filter.
It will do wonders  .
Youre using the cutout filter right? or the posterize function? To get clearer images you should enlarge the images quite a bit and then adjust the brightness and contrast a bit. then use the cutout/posterize filter. It will do wonders . |
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funster
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by funster on Jan 31, 2008 20:46:01 GMT 1, Jed I personally think that the baby image is a lot better than many of the images people seem to be wetting themselves over recently from 'established' artists. IMO the woman is a bit too much like the Nick Walker (i think it was him!) Nike print. The red dancer looks a bit like a design for a Cherry Tango advert. Finally the lollipop man would probably be better sprayed on a wall somewhere. Oh, and the rabbit... its a rabbit  All in all though I think they're good and I like the fact you've let us see them 
Jed I personally think that the baby image is a lot better than many of the images people seem to be wetting themselves over recently from 'established' artists. IMO the woman is a bit too much like the Nick Walker (i think it was him!) Nike print. The red dancer looks a bit like a design for a Cherry Tango advert. Finally the lollipop man would probably be better sprayed on a wall somewhere. Oh, and the rabbit... its a rabbit All in all though I think they're good and I like the fact you've let us see them |
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funster
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Critics needed to view my images!!, by funster on Jan 31, 2008 20:55:11 GMT 1, Oh, and one other thing, Jed asked for critics, he never posted "look how amazing all my art is".
Oh, and one other thing, Jed asked for critics, he never posted "look how amazing all my art is".
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All in all though I think they're good and I like the fact you've let us see them 
