chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 17, 2009 21:01:03 GMT 1, Ok so I've been working on a new stencil (whilst I should've been doing college work ;D), thought I'd post it here since this is a graffiti forum. I'd be really greatful if you guys could gimme some comments and critisism. Remember this is work in progress and is just the rough version of the stencil.
Cheers
Ok so I've been working on a new stencil (whilst I should've been doing college work ;D), thought I'd post it here since this is a graffiti forum. I'd be really greatful if you guys could gimme some comments and critisism. Remember this is work in progress and is just the rough version of the stencil. Cheers |
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 17, 2009 21:49:58 GMT 1, Version 2
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 18, 2009 12:49:44 GMT 1, No replies?
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Ged
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by Ged on Jan 18, 2009 17:27:42 GMT 1, I like the idea and out of the two, I prefer the second one.
I'd lose the Netto bag though, and replace it with the sleeping bag from the first piece. Shopping bags seem to be appearing everywhere 
I like the idea and out of the two, I prefer the second one. I'd lose the Netto bag though, and replace it with the sleeping bag from the first piece. Shopping bags seem to be appearing everywhere |
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 18, 2009 19:19:39 GMT 1, Cheers. I've got a commission to do the dog one with the Netto bag. I can always do another one without it. Thanks for the comment.
Cheers. I've got a commission to do the dog one with the Netto bag. I can always do another one without it. Thanks for the comment.
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 18, 2009 19:27:34 GMT 1, V3 with Ged's advice (I have to be honest I prefer this version)
V3 with Ged's advice (I have to be honest I prefer this version) |
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kay7four
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by kay7four on Jan 18, 2009 20:11:33 GMT 1, I really like the idea but something doesnt seem right with the size of his head in proportion to his body or maybe its how you joined the two images. Is this sprayed or a digital image?
I really like the idea but something doesnt seem right with the size of his head in proportion to his body or maybe its how you joined the two images. Is this sprayed or a digital image?
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 18, 2009 20:47:08 GMT 1, It's just the rough stencil. Photoshop. I know what you mean about the head. I think it's slightly too large and I think it's also to do with the shading on the neck. I've moved onto the clean-up stages now, and I've sorted it out now.
It's just the rough stencil. Photoshop. I know what you mean about the head. I think it's slightly too large and I think it's also to do with the shading on the neck. I've moved onto the clean-up stages now, and I've sorted it out now.
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LEVI C
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by LEVI C on Jan 19, 2009 11:29:31 GMT 1, This Is awesome, brilliant to see an image driven by an original idea, its easy to get and made me smile. One thing I would say, is (imo) you only need "will perform miracles for money". It spells it out a bit too much otherwise, looking forward to seeing more ideas dude, you,re on a good track
This Is awesome, brilliant to see an image driven by an original idea, its easy to get and made me smile. One thing I would say, is (imo) you only need "will perform miracles for money". It spells it out a bit too much otherwise, looking forward to seeing more ideas dude, you,re on a good track
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by ikkeno on Jan 19, 2009 14:21:47 GMT 1, Yeah, as levi c said, your on the right path IMO, only thing I would sugest as constructive critisism is that you maybe fix the lines on top and on the right side of the dogs head, they seem a little uneven, but this is just a sketch so I guess you would have fixed it a bit when you cut it out, other than that the only thing I think might be an idea is if you chose another background color and maybe even made the halo around jesus's head yellow.
Other than those minor adjustments I think you have a great piece here, looking forward to seeing it full size on the street
Keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing more!
Yeah, as levi c said, your on the right path IMO, only thing I would sugest as constructive critisism is that you maybe fix the lines on top and on the right side of the dogs head, they seem a little uneven, but this is just a sketch so I guess you would have fixed it a bit when you cut it out, other than that the only thing I think might be an idea is if you chose another background color and maybe even made the halo around jesus's head yellow. Other than those minor adjustments I think you have a great piece here, looking forward to seeing it full size on the street Keep up the good work, looking forward to seeing more! |
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 19, 2009 18:37:19 GMT 1, Thanks guys. I'll post 2 final versions one with the "son of God" bit and one without. Ikkeno, the background colour was to contrast the stencil so people could see the black and white easily. As for the yellow, I had that in mind. I might add a few other bits of colour. We'll see. Thanks for the comments.
Thanks guys. I'll post 2 final versions one with the "son of God" bit and one without. Ikkeno, the background colour was to contrast the stencil so people could see the black and white easily. As for the yellow, I had that in mind. I might add a few other bits of colour. We'll see. Thanks for the comments.
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by stender on Jan 19, 2009 19:37:31 GMT 1, Love the dog but think jesus has been a bit overdone along with mona lisa, chimps and obama.
Love the dog but think jesus has been a bit overdone along with mona lisa, chimps and obama.
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Mish Mash
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by Mish Mash on Jan 20, 2009 21:39:17 GMT 1, Looking good so far cant wait to see it placed out there somewhere.
"Jesus has been a bit overdone" - made me giggle
Looking good so far cant wait to see it placed out there somewhere.
"Jesus has been a bit overdone" - made me giggle
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 26, 2009 12:37:03 GMT 1, Haha. Cheers Mish Mash. What do you guys think about colour? I was thinking red and yellow for on the pic. Would it go with the blue??
Haha. Cheers Mish Mash. What do you guys think about colour? I was thinking red and yellow for on the pic. Would it go with the blue??
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by dunthingdave on Jan 26, 2009 18:39:27 GMT 1, Love it chymo.Think you shoud go hard with th halo.
Love it chymo.Think you shoud go hard with th halo. |
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chymo
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by chymo on Jan 28, 2009 9:48:02 GMT 1, Thanks Dave. Yeah i was thinking solid with the halo, although I'd quite like to gradually fade it.
Thanks Dave. Yeah i was thinking solid with the halo, although I'd quite like to gradually fade it.
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New, Jesus Stencil WIP, looking for critique, by Oliver Winconek on Jan 28, 2009 12:52:00 GMT 1, like the idea, think the sign needs to look a bit more hand-written though, think that will give it a bit of an edge, after all not many hobos have access to Word!
like the idea, think the sign needs to look a bit more hand-written though, think that will give it a bit of an edge, after all not many hobos have access to Word! |
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