morrissey1
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October 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by morrissey1 on Dec 13, 2007 6:03:51 GMT 1, I am working on a lot of art right now, but currently I am trying to finish this one piece, and I would love anyone's constructive criticism of the piece --any advice would be helpful. And if you hate it, keep it to yourself, please. Thanks for your help.
I am working on a lot of art right now, but currently I am trying to finish this one piece, and I would love anyone's constructive criticism of the piece --any advice would be helpful. And if you hate it, keep it to yourself, please. Thanks for your help. |
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Gentle Mental
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by Gentle Mental on Dec 13, 2007 7:20:32 GMT 1, i think it should be the other way round... lots of virgin marys and the thing on the groin be virgin's logo. as for the man in the middle pick something more intricate or raw - an old oil painting, a stenciled image, something that matches mary)... currently it has too many styles happening... graphic, paint, shiny web 2.0 logos..
it's just an opinion... looking forward to seeing more work!
i think it should be the other way round... lots of virgin marys and the thing on the groin be virgin's logo. as for the man in the middle pick something more intricate or raw - an old oil painting, a stenciled image, something that matches mary)... currently it has too many styles happening... graphic, paint, shiny web 2.0 logos..
it's just an opinion... looking forward to seeing more work!
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streetgirl
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May 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by streetgirl on Dec 13, 2007 9:27:38 GMT 1, I'm with gentlemental. There are too many varying styles, which makes the irony of the two 'virgin' symbols less impactful.
A more intricate, classical working of the man will help this image no end....in my opinion.
Good luck morrissey.
I'm with gentlemental. There are too many varying styles, which makes the irony of the two 'virgin' symbols less impactful.
A more intricate, classical working of the man will help this image no end....in my opinion.
Good luck morrissey.
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seidbereit
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November 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by seidbereit on Dec 13, 2007 9:36:29 GMT 1, I'm afraid I don't quite understand the image.... is the man meant to be juggling all the virgins?
I understand what gentlemental and streetgirl above me say about there perhaps being too many styles but even if it were all in one style I think I'd have the same question. What's it about Moz?
I'm afraid I don't quite understand the image.... is the man meant to be juggling all the virgins?
I understand what gentlemental and streetgirl above me say about there perhaps being too many styles but even if it were all in one style I think I'd have the same question. What's it about Moz?
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morrissey1
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October 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by morrissey1 on Dec 13, 2007 17:24:24 GMT 1, thanks for everyone's ideas and suggestions so far.......what's it about...no clue...i was just messing around with some different images I had handy.....originally the point was to make the underlines in the Virgin logo form a skip-rope shape around the being....but now not sure...anyway, I still have to do some painting and finishing.....but appreciate any feedback...thanks!
thanks for everyone's ideas and suggestions so far.......what's it about...no clue...i was just messing around with some different images I had handy.....originally the point was to make the underlines in the Virgin logo form a skip-rope shape around the being....but now not sure...anyway, I still have to do some painting and finishing.....but appreciate any feedback...thanks!
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Tyler Durden
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February 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by Tyler Durden on Dec 13, 2007 17:30:17 GMT 1, I keep thinking of the Vitruvian Man when I look at this, with Virgin symbols less frequent and the Mary symbol still on the guy in the middle. Good so far though, and look forward to seeing how it develops.
I keep thinking of the Vitruvian Man when I look at this, with Virgin symbols less frequent and the Mary symbol still on the guy in the middle. Good so far though, and look forward to seeing how it develops. |
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Michael Jacob
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October 2006
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by Michael Jacob on Dec 13, 2007 17:32:11 GMT 1, what about using a Rosary and having the Virgin logo as the beads.
what about using a Rosary and having the Virgin logo as the beads.
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Michael Jacob
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by Michael Jacob on Dec 13, 2007 17:33:58 GMT 1, Tyler,
I find myself spending way too much time looking at your little graphic. Its captivating!
Tyler,
I find myself spending way too much time looking at your little graphic. Its captivating!
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morrissey1
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October 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by morrissey1 on Dec 13, 2007 17:34:03 GMT 1, what about using a Rosary and having the Virgin logo as the beads.
hmmmm...very clever..nice...thanks
what about using a Rosary and having the Virgin logo as the beads. hmmmm...very clever..nice...thanks |
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f5ers
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October 2007
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any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism for the new piece Im on, by f5ers on Dec 13, 2007 18:16:35 GMT 1, Needs a p***s.... but much bigger than vetruvian mans..
Needs a p***s.... but much bigger than vetruvian mans..
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