GB
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 11:52:22 GMT 1
WHY!, by GB on Dec 13, 2007 11:52:22 GMT 1, hi man, nice work, some constructive advice, i would try and keep to one medium, like the concept, think if it was a stencil it would look amazing, the angel needs to be anchored more in the picture she feels like a bit of a stamp at the moment. peace g
hi man, nice work, some constructive advice, i would try and keep to one medium, like the concept, think if it was a stencil it would look amazing, the angel needs to be anchored more in the picture she feels like a bit of a stamp at the moment. peace g
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robgee
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 11:53:37 GMT 1
WHY!, by robgee on Dec 13, 2007 11:53:37 GMT 1, I don't like it and wouldn't bother taking it onto a canvas. Twin towers, an angel and a word saying 'why'. Try and think of something more original.
But having said that, if you can actually paint this could look good. As for subject matter. Poor
I don't like it and wouldn't bother taking it onto a canvas. Twin towers, an angel and a word saying 'why'. Try and think of something more original.
But having said that, if you can actually paint this could look good. As for subject matter. Poor
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 11:54:30 GMT 1
WHY!, by raniator on Dec 13, 2007 11:54:30 GMT 1, Not original. Sorry.
Not original. Sorry.
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burnz
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 11:57:48 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 11:57:48 GMT 1, i see what your saying took me ages to draw that angel too lol might have to scap that idea then
i see what your saying took me ages to draw that angel too lol might have to scap that idea then
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:00:46 GMT 1
WHY!, by raniator on Dec 13, 2007 12:00:46 GMT 1, If your drew the angel why do her wings appear to be stuck on, drawn in a different style?
Looks like you google'd 'girl sat down' and 'wings' and stuck the 2 together in Photoshop?
Come on, admit it... you had the idea on the bus on your way to work this morning, cobbled it together when you got in and thought you'd risk it on here? ;-)
If your drew the angel why do her wings appear to be stuck on, drawn in a different style?
Looks like you google'd 'girl sat down' and 'wings' and stuck the 2 together in Photoshop?
Come on, admit it... you had the idea on the bus on your way to work this morning, cobbled it together when you got in and thought you'd risk it on here? ;-)
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Francis
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Dec 13, 2007 12:01:31 GMT 1
WHY!, by Francis on Dec 13, 2007 12:01:31 GMT 1, How many are you going to have in your canvas edition?
How many are you going to have in your canvas edition?
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seidbereit
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:05:17 GMT 1
WHY!, by seidbereit on Dec 13, 2007 12:05:17 GMT 1, Don't want to be over-critical but the composition would be improved if the angel were on the left, the towers on the right and the "why?" (if it really needs to be there at all - an IMHO kind of spoils it) were just in the cloud of smoke already streaming off to towards the left rather than in a fake smoke effect on it's own. Confuses the natural movement of things. As it is it looks like a collection of things that all have little chemistry going on between them. Quite like the sentiment though. Hope I wasn't too harsh.
Don't want to be over-critical but the composition would be improved if the angel were on the left, the towers on the right and the "why?" (if it really needs to be there at all - an IMHO kind of spoils it) were just in the cloud of smoke already streaming off to towards the left rather than in a fake smoke effect on it's own. Confuses the natural movement of things. As it is it looks like a collection of things that all have little chemistry going on between them. Quite like the sentiment though. Hope I wasn't too harsh.
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burnz
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:06:38 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 12:06:38 GMT 1, How many are you going to have in your canvas edition?
of you want one i will make it 1/1
How many are you going to have in your canvas edition? of you want one i will make it 1/1
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seidbereit
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Dec 13, 2007 12:06:57 GMT 1
WHY!, by seidbereit on Dec 13, 2007 12:06:57 GMT 1, If your drew the angel why do her wings appear to be stuck on, drawn in a different style? Looks like you google'd 'girl sat down' and 'wings' and stuck the 2 together in Photoshop? Come on, admit it... you had the idea on the bus on your way to work this morning, cobbled it together when you got in and thought you'd risk it on here? ;-)
Quite like the angel myself. Probably a bit too big though.
If your drew the angel why do her wings appear to be stuck on, drawn in a different style? Looks like you google'd 'girl sat down' and 'wings' and stuck the 2 together in Photoshop? Come on, admit it... you had the idea on the bus on your way to work this morning, cobbled it together when you got in and thought you'd risk it on here? ;-) Quite like the angel myself. Probably a bit too big though.
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burnz
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:09:49 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 12:09:49 GMT 1, Don't want to be over-critical but the composition would be improved if the angel were on the left, the towers on the right and the "why?" (if it really needs to be there at all - an IMHO kind of spoils it) were just in the cloud of smoke already streaming off to towards the left rather than in a fake smoke effect on it's own. Confuses the natural movement of things. As it is it looks like a collection of things that all have little chemistry going on between them. Quite like the sentiment though. Hope I wasn't too harsh.
true thanks for the info think it would look better that way
Don't want to be over-critical but the composition would be improved if the angel were on the left, the towers on the right and the "why?" (if it really needs to be there at all - an IMHO kind of spoils it) were just in the cloud of smoke already streaming off to towards the left rather than in a fake smoke effect on it's own. Confuses the natural movement of things. As it is it looks like a collection of things that all have little chemistry going on between them. Quite like the sentiment though. Hope I wasn't too harsh. true thanks for the info think it would look better that way
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seidbereit
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Dec 13, 2007 12:12:53 GMT 1
WHY!, by seidbereit on Dec 13, 2007 12:12:53 GMT 1, <cough> an maybe in landscape and not portrait with a bit more skyline and something for the angel to sit on
Got any others you want us to rip to pieces?
Hope you go on to finish this one. Would be interested to see how it turns out.
<cough> an maybe in landscape and not portrait with a bit more skyline and something for the angel to sit on Got any others you want us to rip to pieces? Hope you go on to finish this one. Would be interested to see how it turns out.
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burnz
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:14:58 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 12:14:58 GMT 1, right thanks for info going to sarap the Why move angel to other size may be make it a little smaller and towers on right with white back ground and just the smoke and the odd cloud
i will post pics for the canvas step by step wile i do it
thanks for ya input save me doing it then having to start agian
right thanks for info going to sarap the Why move angel to other size may be make it a little smaller and towers on right with white back ground and just the smoke and the odd cloud i will post pics for the canvas step by step wile i do it thanks for ya input save me doing it then having to start agian
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:17:50 GMT 1
WHY!, by raniator on Dec 13, 2007 12:17:50 GMT 1, Also keen to see a canvas as it progresses...
PS. Don't take these crit's to heart too much... it's got potential, just needs tightening up a little... If possible, swap the angel to the left, put the towers on the right, make the angel smaller and the towers bigger...
Good luck
Also keen to see a canvas as it progresses... PS. Don't take these crit's to heart too much... it's got potential, just needs tightening up a little... If possible, swap the angel to the left, put the towers on the right, make the angel smaller and the towers bigger... Good luck
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klyde
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Dec 13, 2007 12:18:05 GMT 1
WHY!, by klyde on Dec 13, 2007 12:18:05 GMT 1, Dude!
Is this a p1ss take?
Dude!
Is this a p1ss take?
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:32:50 GMT 1
WHY!, by paulypaul on Dec 13, 2007 12:32:50 GMT 1, This is going to sound like I'm being c**ty, but i'm not.
How old are you? Cos this looks like some bad o'level work and incredibly obvious...
And that's fine - but you really should have some inbuilt criticism of your own work. If you did - you would not have posted that on here. Show it to a few friends first...
This is going to sound like I'm being c**ty, but i'm not.
How old are you? Cos this looks like some bad o'level work and incredibly obvious...
And that's fine - but you really should have some inbuilt criticism of your own work. If you did - you would not have posted that on here. Show it to a few friends first...
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Existencil
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Dec 13, 2007 12:35:53 GMT 1
WHY!, by Existencil on Dec 13, 2007 12:35:53 GMT 1, The twin towers and an angel. Now thats what i call originality!!
The twin towers and an angel. Now thats what i call originality!!
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burnz
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 12:57:01 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 12:57:01 GMT 1, This is going to sound like I'm being c**ty, but i'm not. How old are you? Cos this looks like some bad o'level work and incredibly obvious... And that's fine - but you really should have some inbuilt criticism of your own work. If you did - you would not have posted that on here. Show it to a few friends first...
im only 12
lol
anyway get a bit of free time and thort i would come up with something to do wile im off keeps me off the drugs lol
i thort a angel and the wtowers would be good going to see how it goes anyway
This is going to sound like I'm being c**ty, but i'm not. How old are you? Cos this looks like some bad o'level work and incredibly obvious... And that's fine - but you really should have some inbuilt criticism of your own work. If you did - you would not have posted that on here. Show it to a few friends first... im only 12 lol anyway get a bit of free time and thort i would come up with something to do wile im off keeps me off the drugs lol i thort a angel and the wtowers would be good going to see how it goes anyway
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 13:49:23 GMT 1
WHY!, by shogun on Dec 13, 2007 13:49:23 GMT 1, The other question you've gotta ask yourself is - "would anyone want this on their wall?"...
The other question you've gotta ask yourself is - "would anyone want this on their wall?"...
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BONGO
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Dec 13, 2007 14:06:34 GMT 1
WHY!, by BONGO on Dec 13, 2007 14:06:34 GMT 1, BONGO VERY VERY SCARED
BONGO VERY VERY SCARED
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alvington89
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Dec 13, 2007 15:16:35 GMT 1
WHY!, by alvington89 on Dec 13, 2007 15:16:35 GMT 1, Samuel Tweet?
Samuel Tweet?
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 15:21:49 GMT 1
WHY!, by Lord Lucas Roham on Dec 13, 2007 15:21:49 GMT 1, Mate, take a look at the 'How to create Street Art' thread. You are the epitome of this.
Like a Pantomime dame
Mate, take a look at the 'How to create Street Art' thread. You are the epitome of this.
Like a Pantomime dame
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Tyler Durden
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Dec 13, 2007 15:31:14 GMT 1
WHY!, by Tyler Durden on Dec 13, 2007 15:31:14 GMT 1, Has the original post been deleted as can't see this? Nor do I think I want to but now it's like morbid curiousity...
Has the original post been deleted as can't see this? Nor do I think I want to but now it's like morbid curiousity...
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br1stol
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WHY!
Dec 13, 2007 15:41:17 GMT 1
WHY!, by br1stol on Dec 13, 2007 15:41:17 GMT 1, Burnz. If you have removed your original post due to some of the critisism on here, i think that is a shame.
I recon a few too many negative critisisims are being aired here - i would like to say keep up the work you are doing, these things take time... a long time. You put your work up here for people to comment on, and as you can see people are only too happy to do that. There are a few good natured pointers that have been posted - take them on board, decided if you recon they will improve upon what you are doing and what you image is trying to portray, and crack on with it... Keep your urge to be creative going, in the end that is what matters - that you are enjoying the process of being creative and doing something. The rest will come through experimentation, trial and error, constuctive critisism you take on board and your own natural progression. Try not to be put off by people knocking what you are doing - forget it - just take on board what you think is going to help you move forward with what you are doing and forget the rest...
It is so easy to knock someone and squash their flare for being creative. And i think that sucks. Encourage people, you'll feel better for it...
Rant over...
Burnz. If you have removed your original post due to some of the critisism on here, i think that is a shame. I recon a few too many negative critisisims are being aired here - i would like to say keep up the work you are doing, these things take time... a long time. You put your work up here for people to comment on, and as you can see people are only too happy to do that. There are a few good natured pointers that have been posted - take them on board, decided if you recon they will improve upon what you are doing and what you image is trying to portray, and crack on with it... Keep your urge to be creative going, in the end that is what matters - that you are enjoying the process of being creative and doing something. The rest will come through experimentation, trial and error, constuctive critisism you take on board and your own natural progression. Try not to be put off by people knocking what you are doing - forget it - just take on board what you think is going to help you move forward with what you are doing and forget the rest... It is so easy to knock someone and squash their flare for being creative. And i think that sucks. Encourage people, you'll feel better for it... Rant over...
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burnz
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Dec 13, 2007 19:17:22 GMT 1
WHY!, by burnz on Dec 13, 2007 19:17:22 GMT 1, took in a few of your points and come up with this think this will be a bit harder to put on canvas but going to try
took in a few of your points and come up with this think this will be a bit harder to put on canvas but going to try
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taco
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Dec 13, 2007 19:38:31 GMT 1
WHY!, by taco on Dec 13, 2007 19:38:31 GMT 1, Has the original post been deleted as can't see this? Nor do I think I want to but now it's like morbid curiousity...
Hypnotic avatar Tyler Durden +1 have lost a good 15mins of my life....(well i say lost...)
Has the original post been deleted as can't see this? Nor do I think I want to but now it's like morbid curiousity... Hypnotic avatar Tyler Durden +1 have lost a good 15mins of my life....(well i say lost...)
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BK83
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Dec 14, 2007 6:25:27 GMT 1
WHY!, by BK83 on Dec 14, 2007 6:25:27 GMT 1, WHY is right.
WHY is right.
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WHY!
Dec 14, 2007 6:29:22 GMT 1
WHY!, by fartofthestate on Dec 14, 2007 6:29:22 GMT 1, Go paint it and come back, photoshop is gay.
Go paint it and come back, photoshop is gay.
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dime683
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Dec 14, 2007 8:39:39 GMT 1
WHY!, by dime683 on Dec 14, 2007 8:39:39 GMT 1, Go paint it and come back, photoshop is gay.
im more of an illustrator man myself.
Go paint it and come back, photoshop is gay. im more of an illustrator man myself.
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