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Aug 13, 2007 22:20:48 GMT 1
new, by dave313perry on Aug 13, 2007 22:20:48 GMT 1, Im not sure about it mate, somethings not sitting right composition wise i think. I reckon its because all the attention it drawn to the detail at the top and suggests that the lower two thirds is neglected in time and effort!?!? To me just looks more of a complete image if the bottom half is chopped off.
Just abit of constructive criticism dont take it to heart! overall i do like your style and execution.
Im not sure about it mate, somethings not sitting right composition wise i think. I reckon its because all the attention it drawn to the detail at the top and suggests that the lower two thirds is neglected in time and effort!?!? To me just looks more of a complete image if the bottom half is chopped off.
Just abit of constructive criticism dont take it to heart! overall i do like your style and execution.
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Aug 13, 2007 22:24:28 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 22:24:28 GMT 1, critisicm are the best comments I can get.
critisicm are the best comments I can get.
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Aug 13, 2007 22:25:15 GMT 1
new, by dave313perry on Aug 13, 2007 22:25:15 GMT 1, could you post up a close-up of the face and shoulders??? cheers (also just creaked my neck trying to view!!!  )
could you post up a close-up of the face and shoulders??? cheers (also just creaked my neck trying to view!!! ) |
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Aug 13, 2007 22:26:03 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 22:26:03 GMT 1, Thanks 
Thanks |
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Aug 13, 2007 22:27:24 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 22:27:24 GMT 1, 
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Aug 13, 2007 22:38:21 GMT 1
new, by dave313perry on Aug 13, 2007 22:38:21 GMT 1, Ahaaa! now that looks much more a complete image to me! or maybe cropped somwhere through the shapes and blood drippings??- of course im no expert so maybe people will disagree?...
But yeah - do quite like it! thumbs up from me! 
Ahaaa! now that looks much more a complete image to me! or maybe cropped somwhere through the shapes and blood drippings??- of course im no expert so maybe people will disagree?... But yeah - do quite like it! thumbs up from me! |
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Aug 13, 2007 22:42:36 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 22:42:36 GMT 1, Thanks lot, I get what you mean bout the bottom, this piece is constantly changing, was at first gonna be in a military jacket cus its bout wars and was inspired by my hate of war and phil oches's song I aint marching no more...
Thanks lot, I get what you mean bout the bottom, this piece is constantly changing, was at first gonna be in a military jacket cus its bout wars and was inspired by my hate of war and phil oches's song I aint marching no more...
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Aug 13, 2007 22:48:45 GMT 1
new, by jB on Aug 13, 2007 22:48:45 GMT 1, Ollie, i personally like it a lot, excellent work! I definitely see some similarities to some of my favorite artists. Good job man!
Ollie, i personally like it a lot, excellent work! I definitely see some similarities to some of my favorite artists. Good job man!
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Aug 13, 2007 23:00:11 GMT 1
new, by dave313perry on Aug 13, 2007 23:00:11 GMT 1, yeah me 2 i like
What about stencilling the image!?!?
Just abit of fun mate! you know you've made it when people start replicating your work! good luck with the future stuff also
Peace
yeah me 2 i like What about stencilling the image!?!? Just abit of fun mate! you know you've made it when people start replicating your work! good luck with the future stuff also Peace |
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Aug 13, 2007 23:07:02 GMT 1
new, by CR on Aug 13, 2007 23:07:02 GMT 1, Just redone one of my pieces, wondered what you all thought, AND if you could redirect me to the right place to post it as I dont wanna piss anyone off by trying to get asmany people as I can to see em... where?  
hey ollie,
I love the addition of the general badge, definatly defines it more.
still think, and this is just an opinion, that you need to lose the bones al thogether and I don't really like the square and circles.
the cropped version without the bones would look pretty cool
CR
Just redone one of my pieces, wondered what you all thought, AND if you could redirect me to the right place to post it as I dont wanna piss anyone off by trying to get asmany people as I can to see em... where? hey ollie, I love the addition of the general badge, definatly defines it more. still think, and this is just an opinion, that you need to lose the bones al thogether and I don't really like the square and circles. the cropped version without the bones would look pretty cool CR |
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Aug 13, 2007 23:07:08 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 23:07:08 GMT 1, ha, the piece started as a stencil idea but went wrong as iv never rele done stencil.
ha, the piece started as a stencil idea but went wrong as iv never rele done stencil.
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Aug 13, 2007 23:11:57 GMT 1
new, by dave313perry on Aug 13, 2007 23:11:57 GMT 1, ha, the piece started as a stencil idea but went wrong as iv never rele done stencil.
Sorry mate just playing, im a g.artist so this kind of thing amuses me! quite sad really! ;D
i like the quality of stroke and depth of colour in the face, and im going to leave it at that and go to bed!
Cheers for the pic and if iv pulled a muscle in my neck your sending me pain killers and paying for physio! ;D
ha, the piece started as a stencil idea but went wrong as iv never rele done stencil. Sorry mate just playing, im a g.artist so this kind of thing amuses me! quite sad really! ;D i like the quality of stroke and depth of colour in the face, and im going to leave it at that and go to bed! Cheers for the pic and if iv pulled a muscle in my neck your sending me pain killers and paying for physio! ;D |
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Aug 13, 2007 23:14:30 GMT 1
new, by Oliver Garland on Aug 13, 2007 23:14:30 GMT 1, Ha, thanks alot, na its looks kl as a stencil. Ill be expecting that bill for the physio then...
Ha, thanks alot, na its looks kl as a stencil. Ill be expecting that bill for the physio then...
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Aug 13, 2007 23:30:46 GMT 1
new, by Yessir on Aug 13, 2007 23:30:46 GMT 1, Nice work Ollie... keep it up mate.
Nice work Ollie... keep it up mate.
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Aug 13, 2007 23:31:50 GMT 1
new, by curiousgeorge on Aug 13, 2007 23:31:50 GMT 1, Blood stain war medals, what are you suggesting??
I like it, the "squares and circles" work, if maybe a tad too many?
Blood stain war medals, what are you suggesting?? I like it, the "squares and circles" work, if maybe a tad too many? |
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Aug 14, 2007 10:40:18 GMT 1
new, by corblimeylimey on Aug 14, 2007 10:40:18 GMT 1, I haven't got a problem with you posting your work here, but there's some threads here that members have used to post their art work, unfortunately that corner of the forum doesn't get as many hits.
banksyforum.proboards82.com/index.cgi?board=justbitfun
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Aug 14, 2007 11:17:44 GMT 1
new, by Daniel Silk on Aug 14, 2007 11:17:44 GMT 1, I like it ;D Good strong image and it really gets you thinking.
I like it ;D Good strong image and it really gets you thinking.
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Aug 17, 2007 2:25:09 GMT 1
new, by BK83 on Aug 17, 2007 2:25:09 GMT 1, someone said something about making this a stencil -- dont do that. if anything -- get rid of the spraypainting aspect -- its redundant for this piece. you've done a great job utilizing the oil paint -- continue with it. I noticed you've only got the spraypaint in there for dripping effect -- this is silly, just use more medium in your oil paint and get your drips that way -- the whole piece will be more uniform then...
take it or leave it....
J
someone said something about making this a stencil -- dont do that. if anything -- get rid of the spraypainting aspect -- its redundant for this piece. you've done a great job utilizing the oil paint -- continue with it. I noticed you've only got the spraypaint in there for dripping effect -- this is silly, just use more medium in your oil paint and get your drips that way -- the whole piece will be more uniform then...
take it or leave it....
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