kay7four
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K74- Babel, by kay7four on Aug 20, 2008 2:31:44 GMT 1, Whats up Yall,
Its been a while but I wanted to share one of my latest pieces. I would love to hear some feedback.
See you all at UP Fest....
Peace.
Whats up Yall, Its been a while but I wanted to share one of my latest pieces. I would love to hear some feedback. See you all at UP Fest.... Peace. |
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K74- Babel, by snowflake8888 on Aug 20, 2008 5:58:56 GMT 1, I get the message behind this but I'm wondering whether it could be more detailed. As something to drop on the street, it's fine, but for a canvas piece it seems bland. As it's an image of a building, looking at the work of Logan Hicks or Nick Walker's The Morning After series and contrasting it with yours might better illustrate what I mean.
Also perhaps you could try spraying the clouds and not using a stencil? Might look a bit more ethereal that way. But keep it up!
I get the message behind this but I'm wondering whether it could be more detailed. As something to drop on the street, it's fine, but for a canvas piece it seems bland. As it's an image of a building, looking at the work of Logan Hicks or Nick Walker's The Morning After series and contrasting it with yours might better illustrate what I mean.
Also perhaps you could try spraying the clouds and not using a stencil? Might look a bit more ethereal that way. But keep it up!
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kay7four
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K74- Babel, by kay7four on Aug 20, 2008 6:51:13 GMT 1, I agree snowflake, the clouds could have been sprayed on and yes the detail could have been better, the building is the tower of babel and I wanted to make it a bit abstract and only make the banner pop out. Logan and Nick are two of the greatest in the world and I hope to be on that level one day mate...Thanks for the thoughts.
I agree snowflake, the clouds could have been sprayed on and yes the detail could have been better, the building is the tower of babel and I wanted to make it a bit abstract and only make the banner pop out. Logan and Nick are two of the greatest in the world and I hope to be on that level one day mate...Thanks for the thoughts.
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K74- Babel, by Fake on Aug 20, 2008 7:30:09 GMT 1, it looks like the tower if pizza...
it looks like the tower if pizza...
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kay7four
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K74- Babel, by kay7four on Aug 20, 2008 20:33:06 GMT 1, Tower of Pizza, could be... here is an unfinished version of the image. Maybe these colors make it a bit less bland...
Tower of Pizza, could be... here is an unfinished version of the image. Maybe these colors make it a bit less bland... |
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