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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by snowflake8888 on Jul 19, 2008 13:03:53 GMT 1, This morning, I went to the Cans Festival tunnel to paint my piece. I'd titled it Natsuken, translated as "Summer Blade".
I'm going to try doing this on canvas as a present for a friend who'll take my wedding pics. I'm inclined to lose the background colour to give it a clean look.
Also, because I'm new to this, I forgot to bring my tag along. Urgh.
Feedback on how I can improve would be much appreciated. Thanks!
This morning, I went to the Cans Festival tunnel to paint my piece. I'd titled it Natsuken, translated as "Summer Blade". I'm going to try doing this on canvas as a present for a friend who'll take my wedding pics. I'm inclined to lose the background colour to give it a clean look. Also, because I'm new to this, I forgot to bring my tag along. Urgh. Feedback on how I can improve would be much appreciated. Thanks!
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Prescription Art
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by Prescription Art on Jul 19, 2008 13:06:28 GMT 1, That looks a nice piece... good work
That looks a nice piece... good work
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by snowflake8888 on Jul 19, 2008 13:08:00 GMT 1, My apologies to those who see this as sacrilege. I decided to do this on the edge of the Banksy Hoody, because the common theme was sharp objects. When I was laying out the stencils, I noticed two police patrolling the tunnel. They stared at me, and I asked them politely and innocently whether it was okay to paint here. They said I needed council permission. I looked as sad as I could (with a bandanna over the lower half of my face), and told them I'd flown all the way here from Japan to paint because it was famous as the only place one would do it. As I'd laid down the stencil, I said that it was a lot better than the disgusting scrawls that had been painted over some of the pieces.
The police considered for a while, then told me to go to a quiet corner to paint and to say that if anyone asked, they'd never spoken to me.
I sprayed my piece next to the Banksy Hoody. I also used what was left of my black and white paint to repair some of the unsightly tagging. Then I left.
Dressing in a nice coat and being polite to the police can have surprising results.
My apologies to those who see this as sacrilege. I decided to do this on the edge of the Banksy Hoody, because the common theme was sharp objects. When I was laying out the stencils, I noticed two police patrolling the tunnel. They stared at me, and I asked them politely and innocently whether it was okay to paint here. They said I needed council permission. I looked as sad as I could (with a bandanna over the lower half of my face), and told them I'd flown all the way here from Japan to paint because it was famous as the only place one would do it. As I'd laid down the stencil, I said that it was a lot better than the disgusting scrawls that had been painted over some of the pieces.
The police considered for a while, then told me to go to a quiet corner to paint and to say that if anyone asked, they'd never spoken to me.
I sprayed my piece next to the Banksy Hoody. I also used what was left of my black and white paint to repair some of the unsightly tagging. Then I left.
Dressing in a nice coat and being polite to the police can have surprising results.
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gilsteph
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by gilsteph on Jul 19, 2008 13:47:14 GMT 1, Cool story and nice work. I like it.
Cool story and nice work. I like it.
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Rourke
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by Rourke on Jul 19, 2008 13:52:29 GMT 1, Excellent work mate. really like it
Excellent work mate. really like it
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loucastel
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by loucastel on Jul 19, 2008 14:02:38 GMT 1, I personally like the coloured background, softens the main image a bit, and allows the eye to take in more, rather than one stark image. love it!!
I personally like the coloured background, softens the main image a bit, and allows the eye to take in more, rather than one stark image. love it!!
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trowel
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by trowel on Jul 19, 2008 14:03:39 GMT 1, Great to see some genuine art appearing in the tunnel if you ask me. And I think Banksy would be delighted that someone went over his piece, as that's kind of the whole point of the Cans project, to bring art back onto the streets and to stop treating every Banksy as some kind of National Trust monument right?
Great to see some genuine art appearing in the tunnel if you ask me. And I think Banksy would be delighted that someone went over his piece, as that's kind of the whole point of the Cans project, to bring art back onto the streets and to stop treating every Banksy as some kind of National Trust monument right?
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Harveyn
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by Harveyn on Jul 19, 2008 14:07:08 GMT 1, Great story and a nice piece. keep the background IMO.
Going to move this to the new artists section. Some great new talent about and great to see lots of members participating in that section.
Great story and a nice piece. keep the background IMO.
Going to move this to the new artists section. Some great new talent about and great to see lots of members participating in that section.
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etched
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by etched on Jul 19, 2008 14:45:09 GMT 1, keep the backround, it adds dept and movemet
keep the backround, it adds dept and movemet
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by snowflake8888 on Jul 19, 2008 15:21:40 GMT 1, Thank you for the feedback so far! I didn't know that the colours would have that effect. I'll keep working on that.
Thank you for the feedback so far! I didn't know that the colours would have that effect. I'll keep working on that.
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BlightSociety
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by BlightSociety on Jul 19, 2008 15:26:34 GMT 1, Iโm gonna disagree with allot of the people here and say you might want to tighten up the white in the background. If you bring it closer to the out line of the character itโll show of the detail of your stencil more and make it jump off the wall. You still have all those other colours your using to show the movement and depth.
Iโm gonna disagree with allot of the people here and say you might want to tighten up the white in the background. If you bring it closer to the out line of the character itโll show of the detail of your stencil more and make it jump off the wall. You still have all those other colours your using to show the movement and depth.
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by snowflake8888 on Jul 19, 2008 16:33:54 GMT 1, Iโm gonna disagree with allot of the people here and say you might want to tighten up the white in the background. If you bring it closer to the out line of the character itโll show of the detail of your stencil more and make it jump off the wall. You still have all those other colours your using to show the movement and depth.
Thanks blightsociety! I've looked at your website, and particularly like the one with the girl done by Irony. To tighten up on the background, do you have a base stencil with just the outline cut out so that you can achieve that effect?
Iโm gonna disagree with allot of the people here and say you might want to tighten up the white in the background. If you bring it closer to the out line of the character itโll show of the detail of your stencil more and make it jump off the wall. You still have all those other colours your using to show the movement and depth. Thanks blightsociety! I've looked at your website, and particularly like the one with the girl done by Irony. To tighten up on the background, do you have a base stencil with just the outline cut out so that you can achieve that effect?
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Heavyconsumer
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by Heavyconsumer on Jul 20, 2008 7:38:49 GMT 1, Hi, welcome and massive congratulations on getting your first piece up in such a great spot. I like this piece.
I think that the lines around the character's waist could be improved and something that might be worth a try is a little more intricacy or detailing on the flowers, which are a very nice touch. Also not digging the horizontal "break" through the image, where it looks as if there is a seem between upper and lower stencils. Please take these comments positively if possible. I'm just a layman, so not viewing this as an artist and I really like the piece on the whole. Good luck!
Hi, welcome and massive congratulations on getting your first piece up in such a great spot. I like this piece.
I think that the lines around the character's waist could be improved and something that might be worth a try is a little more intricacy or detailing on the flowers, which are a very nice touch. Also not digging the horizontal "break" through the image, where it looks as if there is a seem between upper and lower stencils. Please take these comments positively if possible. I'm just a layman, so not viewing this as an artist and I really like the piece on the whole. Good luck!
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by master on Jul 20, 2008 10:17:33 GMT 1, Like it very much, keep up a good work!!!
Like it very much, keep up a good work!!!
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by snowflake8888 on Jul 24, 2008 13:06:01 GMT 1, I went out last night. Had to be as quick as I could as a bunch of hoodys nearby were eyeing me. I managed to eliminate the seam but screwed up on the colouring. Urgh.
I went out last night. Had to be as quick as I could as a bunch of hoodys nearby were eyeing me. I managed to eliminate the seam but screwed up on the colouring. Urgh.
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Danny O'Connor
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Natsuken - Feedback appreciated, by Danny O'Connor on Jul 24, 2008 17:09:20 GMT 1, Looks great on that background with the grain of the wood and the bits of torn paper.
Looks great on that background with the grain of the wood and the bits of torn paper.
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